The Other Side of Me

There is a darkness deep inside
it is a piece of me that I want to hide
She takes my shape.
She bears my face.
but she's not me

Its plain to see
that this is just another side of me.
Its like a split personality,
its inside of me.
You have one too,
so don't blame me
there's apart of you
that bears this burden too.

Author's Note

ignore punctuation errors

Reviews

[EvilAngel]

exactly wut if feel and im sure others do 2.dont u sumtimes think everyone shud be diagnosed with multiple personality disorder?

[RonnieBreight]

I like how it's directed at the reader. So many poems are all I, I, I. But this ones unique because it shifts and speaks to the reader. It makes it a more intimate read. :).

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is a good poem and it is true .. as you have written so well..
Its like a split personality,
its inside of me.
You have one too,
so don't blame me
there's apart of you
that bears this burden too.

this is true.. enjoyed this very good write.
Chloe

[Griffin Hill]

Interesting twist at the end.