Insatiable

They believed that the world

has been swallowed by them

could be masticated the time

and dripped with immortality.

 

They acknowledged

that this not their God had created

and they created God on their similarity.

There are as kites released windward.

like silent before the storm.

 

They still are isatiable

not of the knowledge

but force of

authority

and green papers

 

***

 

They are We

lost in

our uncontrolable desires

 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Loved the concept:


They are We
lost in
our uncontrolable desires

Very captivating and eye-catching. You speak the heart for sure. It's seemed like we blaming the world for mishappenings but forgetting the reason of such s***s.. that's being happened by "us".. & it's all cos of some uncontrolled desires... very deep and thoughtful poetry!

[RattyAdalan]

Thank you! You are right.. People love war... I see it for the situation in France, Syria or Russia.. It's terrible and scared. We agree to became evil and don't care about world only a lot of people thinking about how you said "uncontrolled desires". Is there a hope for better world? Or it's only a dream? I don't know...

[Adam Adams]

Yeah, somehow...
.. it's all 'bout uncontrolled desire that got people either "Do" or "get "Died" for "NOTHING", but for the "peace" of hearts' .. that's even never found nor will ev'r be found, eventually .. as long as their desires are not "controlled" ... nothing's meant to be "controlled" or "relinquished" to the bottom of the mother land called or well treasured with the name: "EARTH" ...

#ParisAttacks ... What terrorist found outta that s**t? "Peace?" That's what they think so .. but in real ... they cut themselves into freaking "PIECES" ... nothing much .. nothing less. No more speeches .. get off such stress.

I kinda like the way you create questions outta review .. impressive. It's always good having conversations regarded or related to writing. Nice shot. Would be looking forward to reading "you"!

[Raven]

i really enjoyed reading this,well done

[RattyAdalan]

Thank you Raven :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me much of what has gone on the past days....they make up their own god, and kill in his name...the uncontrolable desire to ruin and maim...

these kites have no direction, just chaotic flying.

excellent piece.

[RattyAdalan]

Yes... this situation in Paris is horrible. I don't know what I can say... It's scared me. I wrote this poem one year ago. I inspired by all our desires, defects and weakness. Today I see that my poems has a lot of meanings. I am glad you like it.

[RattyAdalan]

My poem* - my mistake