Let Me!

For God's sake hold your tongue and let me love you more than before.

Let me see my face,

In your beautiful blue eyes.

Let me hear your voice,

Whenever, wherever I wish.

 

Let me take you away,

Somewhere, to a secret place.

Let me hold you tight,

Until I hear your breath’s race.

 

Let me feel your touch,

In deep of my chest.

Let me Love you so much,

For whole day & whole night.

 

Now let me hide you in my Heart,

And I’ll never let you go away.

Let me claim you as mine forever,

Oh! Please don’t ask me WHY?

 

Reviews

[poetic soul]

its a good read!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[MIA ST. PAUL]

This is really good. It reminds of someone desperate for love but is afraid of reaching out to get it! very nice and well balanced. very good Job!

[Honeypot]

I like this one. I think often in a relationship people over think certain circumstances and this reminds me of that. I think its great! You did a wonderful job on it. The poem has a nice flow to it.