Broken Heart!

Broken Heart!

A Poem by Ratikant
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Words sometimes can't explain all your feelings

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Here is my Heart,

It’s torn and broken.

Loving somebody too much,

This is my Gain.

 

Nothing really matters,

To anyone, anymore.

Just waiting for the day to come,

When I will be no more.

 

Thank you my Love !

Thanks for loving me a lot.

Taking my Life away,

And bringing it to an End !!!

© 2009 Ratikant


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I felt your passion and see the imagery you painted here. This is a nice piece of writing and I thank you for sharing it here.

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I felt this was very powerful. You did a great job packing in many feelings into very little words.
Great job. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 24, 2009
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