Water Drop

Water Drop

A Poem by Rasteely
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Just a short little poem. The feeling of getting completely soaked by the rain.

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I remember standing
in the rain.
There was water
everywhere.
I could feel
one long drip moving.
Freezing my spine,
washing my butt,
and squishing my shoes.

© 2011 Rasteely


Author's Note

Rasteely
Comment if you want:) This is a short poem about standing in the rain, which is something I wish to do more often.

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I love the playfulness at the end... :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yuck, I hate the rain, I really hate the Squishy shoes! Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A bad situation with a contagiously optimistic slant. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 19, 2011
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Rasteely
Rasteely

North Charleston, SC



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