Who are you?

Who are you?

A Story by Rassoul
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A message to a strange person who meant everything for me.

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Last night we were talking and I couldn't recognize your voice, you sounded really weird like I was talking to someone else. Your words are not the same anymore, it feels like you're hiding something, something that will destroy me but you cannot say it.
Who are you? you're not the person I fell in love with. I thought we're going through an ordeal but we're not, you changed and I'm waiting for that day when you won't be here anymore; it would be such a lamentable thing.
We've been through so many months of struggle and suffering but not both of us, I was the only one suffering. 
I guess I will wait for that day when we're wandering the streets aimlessly and we meet by chance, I will ask you the same question. Who are you?
-Rassoul

© 2017 Rassoul


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This is very brilliantly conceived & written. I was transfixed thru the whole thing as I read & imagery was flitting thru my brain, reminding me of the various times in life when this situation was upon me. The hardest thing in life is when two people in love grow in different directions & it happens pretty often unfortunately. You've painted one such scene here that helped us feel how it really feels. The thing I like the very best of all about your observations is the way you are not injecting any blame, but simple describing the truth of how it feels.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your words and for your review, I really appreciate it!



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From lovers to strangers... love this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
True couple struggle together, you expressed your feeling really well..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Farhan.
I liked the way you expressed your feelings. Nicely written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Najam.
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Haha, pain turned to hatred....Of course honesty pays off...
I enjoyed it...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Surya!

Glad you like it
Aloha, the hurt is strongly conveyed, as is the feeling of loss. A difficult place for any couple to find themselves. Well expressed. Izzy

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
ahh when lovers become strangers...
another great work from you...
beautiful , simply beautiful.



Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Donicca!

I really appreciate your review.
loved it , the way you make us connect to the writing is really amazing. cheers.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you, jayanth.
wonderful omar..
i loved this and it's a beautiful piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Wajiha!
Glad you liked it.
Wajiha Nayeem

7 Years Ago

my pleasuree....
This is wonderful. The emotions and the way you made it makes it so perfect. I loved reading it. Your writings are always impressive.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, violet!
well done, this is amazing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rassoul

7 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on May 23, 2017
Last Updated on May 27, 2017
Tags: Who, Someone, Stranger, Broken

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Rassoul
Rassoul

Cairo, Egypt



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