You're too fucked up to be loved.

to the dead soul of yours

He used to sleep with an empty head, an empty mind, now he's sleeping with a head full of thoughts about you. 

You said you loved him, was it true? If it was, why is he living with a broken heart right now? Is because he trusted you, blindly.

He did everything he could do just to keep you around and you did everything you could to push him away. Oh boy, he's still here, fighting for your existance.

How many times did you break his heart? You're not even counting and he's still here; healing himself every single time just to be there for you. However, he had enough pain. He said living in pain with you is better than living happily without you but damn, he had enough.

He accepted you as who you are and he kept fighting for you but unfortunately, you were fighting against him; that's why he lost the war.

Go ahead and find someone else to love you as much as he did. But girl, you're too fucked up to be loved.

-Rassoul

Author's Note

Need your honest opinion about this.

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Damn....this was amazing rassoul...i loved this!

[Rassoul]

Wajiha, thanks a lot, love.

[Nora]

It's just great short story, you expression of it very well

[Rassoul]

Thanks Nourhan, glad you loved it.

[Psychotic Lily]

It was a great story/poem. The way you express the pain of heartbreak was very clear that it's easy to understand and relate to the guy's feelings. Looking forward to your next work.

[Rassoul]

Thanks a lot!

I hope you like my next too.

[Nora]

:)) you're welcome,

[Surya]

They dont understand the value of a person, they take kindness for granted,,,,I loved it...:)

[Rassoul]

Thanks Surya, glad you loved it.