Not the person you're looking for.

Heartbreaker.

You're a good girl, all you ever wanted was someone who would always be there for you, not someone who's always running away. You wanted someone who'd find time to talk to you, not someone who's always busy.

You needed someone to watch the stars with at night, not to count them alone; waiting for him to call. You wanted someone who listens to your problems and try to come up with a solution, not someone who tells you everything will be okay.

You wanted someone to call you at night to make sure you're okay and safe, not someone who drowns you in tears on your pillow after a long night of yelling. You needed someone who's wishing to end up marrying you, not breaking you.

You wanted someone to love you as the way you deserve to be loved. But darling, He's not the person you're looking for.

-Rassoul

Author's Note

Tell your honest opinion about this.

Reviews

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

I really like the story, or message, better. The wrong one always finds you before the right one does. Psychology has not been able to explain why. Such scenarios can be heartbreaking, and this piece conveys all the struggles and pains very well.

But I would really like it if you write something happy too. Look at the stars and find their flickering smiles.

How about trying something funny or inspiring next time?I'd really like to read some of it from you.

Love,
Vasilees.

[Rassoul]

I guess I will try that.

The thing is, these writings are old, I'm just sharing them before I share my newest.

Thanks a lot tho for your words and review, Vasilees.

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

That's cool! It's good that you're sharing your old works first, we'll be able to see how much you've grown as a writer. You're always welcome.

Love,
Vasilees.

[Surya]

Girls do need honest people....but they sometimes end up with a wrong choice...
I loved it...:)

[Rassoul]

Thanks a lot for your review, Surya.