My Nation

Hey, its a trunk poem written almost 3 years ago, when I got my inclanation towards writing. Actually I tried writing this by keeping in mind the tune of the song 'tonight Im loving you' by Enrique.

 

MY NATION

This is a situation

in the every examination

at every institution

but I got my motivation

 

without hesitation

this is my declaration

that I want my clearation

it will be my satisfaction

even without perfection

this is my passion

not made for revulsion

the blood I got in my veins of revolution

for a change in situation

to take the game to perfection

through an evolution

 

so can you make equation?

can you give evaluation?

through your valuation

I don't want any comparsion

 

I need only contribution

which can be throuh your little suggestion

 

for an ambition

and its not about me

its not about individualisation

its about realisation

its about gamevolution

Its all about a step to perfection with concentration

 

 

Author's Note

I don't know why I have given spaces ;) I just copied it as it was written at that time) maybe something was going, but I don't remember now :)

Reviews

[radio raven]

Like an inspiring war cry.

[Laminators Dubai]

I liked the poem. Bit bogged my mind...after all its our nation but a part of this world.
You ripped with rhyme. Its good to give some space...its important not just for reader but for mind.

[Rasi Rana]

thanks ) :)