Why Fate Waits ?

God, You see the truth but waits

for what you wait?

and why such a long wait?

why's your justice pending till next life?

why not in this life?

why?

To check my real friends and foes?

if so

then why  don't you add time

to fix up the existing rhyme

why such a long time?

Is my Question wrong?

Am I just addicted to speed 'cause of this new age?

or some rage after reading Leo Tolstoy?

Why such a long wait?

You see the truth but waits

You know the reality, still You wait

Why such a long wait?

'cause its in my fate?

but who wrote it?

Me or You?

or its just my Faith which no longer can wait?

yet to see the real court of Yours

Now you may say I'm furious

but I'm just a little bit curious

want to know

and I know You will let Me know

Evil got to go

and please, all in single show

don't matter where it is

either on the real stage or back stage

I'll wait on my new page.

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

This is a very real quandary in my life as well, and I feel it is a very good way you have developed the theme! It certainly is a very central idea in any honest man's heart, the question of when to meet our fate! Why, why DO we wait? Every fiber of our being seems to shriek that we must take control ourselves, but it seems this is something no one may control! It truly is in the hands of God, or the gods, or the divine. I actually find myself envious of those who find a cause at the last moment in the worst of circumstances, who save a child from a burning building before dying of asphyxiation. Is it weird I think, "Lucky devils!!" when I hear about things like that?! We all want our lives to mean something, and yet the meaning of our lives eludes us. Why? I conjecture it has something to do with not being able to see from the correct perspective. I think if you could look at your whole life from the point of view of the end, and then trace it back towards the beginning, you would be quite proud of what you accomplished. It is the direction we are forced to head in, where so many different paths seem to open up away from us, that is so frustrating and confusing. You have elaborated on this well I wish I knew what more to add, but it is a great theme to develop for sure!!

[Rasi Rana]

A big thanks for such review, you exactly wrote the same what i was thinking while writing this piece) and u r welcomed bro to add more on this theme) :)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Awesome!!! I love when I get it!!! Okay, I will think how to add...I am very touched by this particular consideration. Those who can really feel this desire to add to life are certainly "my people."

[Rasi Rana]

I also feels the same bro :)
thanks

[Mskendra Renee]

i feel like this sometimes when it come to god. i love the structure of this and how you delivered it. thanks for sharing.

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Wow! I just reviewed this and my review seems to have disappeared!! I am shocked and confused. To summarize though, I feel you have done a terrific job at explaining a very important theme in all our lives!!! I am very glad you found the words to develop such a noble idea. Please forgive my frustration at losing my earlier much more well worded comment!!!

[Rasi Rana]

I think its not lost yet :) on this poem, I got 2 reviews from ur side)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Oh!!! Awesome!!! What a relief. My computer doesn't seem to like this site. It always takes a long time to post things! So glad you got the first one!

[Rasi Rana]

lol Same with me bro, many times it takes time and at d same time wen U open other site, it takes no time. Something wrong with this site, but anyways I love it :)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Yeah, there servers must be slow or something...They need to pay for more server time! I used to work for an online store and we eventually had to do the upgrade. So does Writer's Cafe!!

[Rasi Rana]

hmm, it can be a reson)

[Laminators Dubai]

You read tolstoy !? Me too!!! Sorry can't help it^^
I liked the poem and the start was just magnificent.
Keep writing!

[Rasi Rana]

yeah I read once)

[Laminators Dubai]

Okay. Well i have three or maybe four.

[Rasi Rana]

good) ............)

[Raymond Federle]

Wonderfully done. I enjoyed it very much!

[Rasi Rana]

Happy that u enjoyed it) :)

[Cody Williams]

A wonderful write Rasi! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write.
A title : Fate can't wait...

[Rasi Rana]

I added your suggestion, but wid a little modification) I hope u won't mind)

[Sami Khalil]

Not at all...You are welcome...:)...............

[Kagami2110]

I find this poem interesting since it reflects about how everyone goes in life. It's a great view of how we generally are. Again some grammatical errors can be pointed out. But good job though.

[Rasi Rana]

Thanks for checking it out) :)

[Rasi Rana]

and again I would like u to pint out some specific mistakes, leaving cases mistakes
I hope I'm not irritating You

[Kagami2110]

No. Don't worry, it's totally fine.

1. why you don't add time -- "Why don't you add time?"
2. so long time - "such a long time"
3. so long wait? - "such a long wait?"
4. You the reality - was a bit confused here
5. want to know - "I want to know"

Again, these are just what I think is right. So over all rules may not actually be accurate.

[Rasi Rana]

Thanks a lot dear)

[Saddam]

and I know You will let Me know
Evil got to go
God is waiting for a good reason my friend. I love this poem.
Good and thank you for share your question and curiosity.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a very thought provoking piece.Who makes our fate god or us ?Is it already preordained?Is our destiny a foregone conclusion?When will we have our answers to these questions? In this life or the next?This is the truth so many questions so little answers.I really like it:)

[Rasi Rana]

Thanks for reviewing it) yea sometimes I do ask these questions to myself, sometimes I kno the answr but at the end I finish with same questions.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha questions ,questions when will it end lol.You are welcome:)