Friends Night

These lines I wrote after our final school exams got over. It was really a moment to celebrate(students know it very well) I tried to write this in a timeline, that is from evening chat to night.

Its 23rd of March but it seems like 15th of August(Indian Independence Day)

I'm free I'm free

Its evening but my day is dawning now

'cause I'm with my friends

wind blowing is clear

mind thinking without fear

friends are on my side

every step on the way is looking like a party sight

Its Wednesday but it seem Saturday

but there is still something going on

what will be on next date?

thinking about our fate

exams are over

results have to over/result are in a cover

Now look at lol (my friend's nick name)

He's concerned about his goal

swinging between C(Cricket, a sport) and R(Rap)

but his favourite is CR(Cristiano Ronaldo or both) 

We don't know who we are

some of us in mind war

fighting for the future

without tutor

we are on a mission

without ammunition

we want treasury

'cause we are in misery

Now keep the things of new stage(future)

on back stage

'cause its 23rd of March and it seems 15th august

Thoughts are coming like the colors of Holi(Indian Festival of colors)

Hearts are lighting like the lights of Diwali(festival of lights, Indian Christmas :) )

I'm on rooftop but feels on top

Its night so goodbye my friends

stop the fight think about the right

and everything will be alright

I can understand

even though we haven't hand in hand

but we are friend which got no end

Author's Note

tried to make it lyrical) If you find any flaw please comment :) (praising also welcomed, if you think ;) )
and suggest a title, please) :)

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah! ( and i hit my guitar for the last time tonight)
Really cool and full of fun! Im amazed and you did a creative and impressive job for the time.

[Rasi Rana]

thanks a lot for expressing your views)

[Laminators Dubai]

.............^^

[Rasi Rana]

nice way to fill the comment box with atleast 10 words) ;)

[Saddam]

you skech beautifully the day of freedom. I knew when we used to go school a tiredness always follow. But in holidays we did not remebered to open the bag.
well done my friend lovely and reality.

[Rasi Rana]

:) yeah u got it closely) thanks for reviewing bro)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Nice one Rasi.I can almost feel the excitement flowing off the page.This is a wonderful write:P

[Rasi Rana]

Thanks again :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Daniel Sala]

Nice, the excitement about finishing the exams comes through clearly and the hopes and aspirations also, a good poem!

[Rasi Rana]

Thanks Daniel)

[soulesswriter]

You should add the date for Diwali and I didn't find any mistakes but that's cuz I'm tired but I liked it and if u want I could try to read it later.its a cool poem and many ppl just finished finals so many people celebrated .its a great poem and mabey you should name (finally over,time for friends,or just the way you have it is cool

[Rasi Rana]

Thanks for presenting your views and suggesting names)