Fear of Ecstasy and Bliss

When you fear happiness

Ecstasy flashed in front of my eyes,

That had seen only tears;

It was not a dream,

Because I dare not think of the light beam,

For it would break down,

Just like my soul has sunk,

Into darkness that had no end,

Just sadness did it lend;

I screamed, pleaded, cried,

But I was just left with hope that had died;

Today when I see happiness,

I fear of ecstasy and bliss.....

Author's Note

I don't think it has come out the good that I do. Well, it was basically because I just wrote it because I wanted to just write a poem now. So, yeah I don't think it is really that good.

Sometimes when one has been too much in dark and pain, he fears of the happiness when it comes in real because he has been broken badly. Hope I have conveyed this in the poem.

Thanks for reading. Hope you liked it. Please give your views. Appreciations and Criticisms are welcome. :)

Reviews

[Bear]

Your writing English has improved so much in the last few weeks that you sound like a native. I am glad to see the improvements happening so fast, it is plain to see that you no longer need my looking over your shoulder. I am happy for you and the high level of poetry you are creating, good luck, good writing and good poetry my friend :~)

[Rainslover]

Thank you so muchhhhh! It feels so good hearing it from you and really thanks for guiding me all the way! And you will be my teacher always! :)

[Emily]

Very nice wording and meaning!
Well done!!

[Rainslover]

Thank you so much! :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

excellent and thought provoking write

[Rainslover]

Thank you so much! :)

[FaeryQueen]

this is soooooooooooooooo greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaat!

[Rainslover]

Thank you soooooooooo mucccchhhhhhhh! :)

[FaeryQueen]

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu are welcome :)

[Sebastian Falzarano]

I actually like the poem. It was quick, flowed smoothly, and had very little grammical errors. The only problem I have is that the theme isn't clear enough.

[Rainslover]

Thank you so much! Well, I have put the theme in my author's note, I always do that. It's just that when a person experiences too much darkness in life, even when light is really in front of me, he fears to enter it afraid that it would break down again or it is just a dream.

Thank you soooo muchhhhh! I'll try to make no grammatical errors next time. :)

[Sebastian Falzarano]

They weren't anything major. Just always double check your work when you are finished.

[Rainslover]

I will from the next time. Thank you! :)

[Sebastian Falzarano]

Your welcome.