Words of Hatred

When you hate yourself!

Useless selfish wretch

They call me,

I pretend to not care,

But I know, it hurts too much;

 

When I'm all alone,

When nobody can hear me,

Those tears flow out, free;

All the pain, my own,

 

Falling down,

So that I never rise,

Nobody to hear my cries,

In the dead town,

 

Numbness on my lips,

I fear to speak a word,

To hear words of hatred,

Towards myself, if truth slips;

Everything lost,

If I ever had anything;

Life has become nothing,

But a broken heart...

Author's Note

It's like that you feel some times. Like you hate yourself! That you are just useless! Who says it doesn't hurt when someone calls you useless! It hurts, if not when everyone is there but when you are there every voice that scolds you echos in the silence and you cry, cry in the silence!!!

Reviews

[Bear]

Bravo! Critique: I don't see anything that needs changed :~)
My review, Wow, you have captured the emotion needed to express this situation. You word choices all fit together so it has a consistent meaning and you picked a great way to finish with impact. You writing in English will not be a problem for very long with you putting out work like this. I am very happy for you, keep up the good work my friend :~)

[Rainslover]

Thank you so much! I am so happy! Maybe I will do it more better! Thank you!!!

[Vera Fnk]

wow! I really like your poem, it's very easy to relate to it :)

[Rainslover]

Thanks! Glad you like it!

[Flutterby aish]

Your poems reflect reality and that element is something which gets the reader to connect even more. We all have felt that way...are bound to feel it even in the future, because we are humans and no matter how strong every individual is, there is a little weakness in all of us and that bring us all to a common ground. But, in the end it doesn't matter, how we endure everything but how we get up and be strong once again. you are a strong soul and no matter what, i know you are the one who will always get up, and fight. I loved your piece, it was beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

[Rainslover]

Thanks Aish!
Glad to hear it! Hope so!
Happy that you liked it!

[Flutterby aish]

:D hope for the best gurl n u'll get it! ;)

[Rainslover]

Just hope! :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

words can hurt so deeply...and they can be apologized for but the trust is never fully returned, a really big why for being careful what you say...well penned...

[Rainslover]

Thank You!

[Emily]

I have had that feeling before. I hate it!
Vary nice wright!
Keep it up!

[Rainslover]

Yeah! Everyone feels it like you hate yourself and are worthless to live on this earth!
Thank you!

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Gosh, this is so very emotional it break the heart.
Yes, many of us have felt this way at some point and survived but it's so difficult in the moment.

[Rainslover]

Thank you so much!
Yes we have felt and maybe might feel again, but we keep surviving!