Supressed rage

I am planning to start a poetry book and would really like honest views on them! It would be really helpful to asses where I am and if I need a lot more improvement if I can further go ahead! cand

who do you think you are,
to grab her innocence with those demon-like claws of yours,
the unpleasant smirk on your face,
indicating that you are up,
to something horrid,
your hands trailing down her body,
like an insect crawling down her body,
her voices is unheard, as your stiff palm is placed on her mouth harshly,
slowly, yet harshly, you enter through,
she pleads with you, begs you to stop and leave her alone,
but thate evil laugh of yours says everything,
that evil laugh,which is a constant visitor in her nightmares,
her voices hasve been suppressed, as she is asked to keep quiet.
why me? she asked herself, teary eyed,
fear building inside her,
about if the society supports her or not,
fear and anxiety builds inside her,which hauntings her through out,
she hates herself ,as she has became the talk of the town,
as every finger was pointed at her,
she wants to run ,
run away from everything and everyone,
she kept running and running ,until she can’t find the very end,
she sat down and sought to herself,
that this is not the end,
life should move on,
erase every memory and start afresh,
as there is so much to achieve,

Author's Note

I am planning to start a poetry book and would really like honest views on them! It would be really helpful to asses where I am and if I need a lot more improvement if I can further go ahead! candid review is appreciated
Thank you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the energy of the words. Remember need to remind the reader of start point and ending. Using the capital letter would do this. Hard to make a poem complete and understandable. The key to a great poem. Read aloud and you can hear the strength and the weaknesses. You have a powerful story shared in the poetry. Just make the poem easier to read for the reader.
Coyote

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I don't know what is for everybody or not. But I think it's very important what you wrote. We sometimes try to cover our eyes to live at fake paradise. This message is very powerful. I can feel fear of victim and her pain. It's very disturbing writing but very useful. Cause remind us this world is not paradise. This world need healing . And one of the way of healing is civil discussion . I hope you will get more reasonable reviews where people can give their opinions about violence on women. For me your misspelling actually make this writing more alive. Piece is feel very rough and truthful. So well done dear poet.