LoveA Poem by rashmiI would like your honest opinion on my poetry work as I'm planning to publish them on a large scale and would want to know if it's good to go
You promised to be mine
And left, Just like the glow lantern, The scars you carved, So beautifully, Just like the sculptor. The insecurities you created , For you to feel secured, Just like the narcissist. But, the wish we made while leaving the lantern is fulfilled, You still stay in my heart as carvings, Though the insecurities disappeared. © 2020 rashmiAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorrashmiAbouti am Rashmi ,19 years old and love to write poems at my free time. i am planning to get a poetry book published to reach a greater audience and it would be a great help if you help asses if my poetry .. more..Writing
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