Black hole

Black hole

A Poem by rashmi
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I would like an honest opinion on my poems as I'm planning to publish them on a large scale and would like to see if it's worth it or I need more practice

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Wanting to disappear,
Into the black hole.
Losing the sight of the outside world,
Drowning into the emptiness to feel myself.
Creating my own world is much better.
Spilling my imagination of life into the blank black space,
and living in it is better than the reality,
which is more worthwhile than the colours here.

Wanting to disappear,
Into the black hole!
Your darkness seems like home,
just like I wanted.
You are the hope with whichas I can fill my emptiness.
Your darkness is my need.
I Promiseing I willould stay until this world of ours gets coloured,
A better world is here in thise pitch black place.
Wanting to disappear
From the colours now here!

© 2020 rashmi


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Added on May 24, 2020
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rashmi
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i am Rashmi ,19 years old and love to write poems at my free time. i am planning to get a poetry book published to reach a greater audience and it would be a great help if you help asses if my poetry .. more..

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