taste the rainbow

taste the rainbow

A by Bre
"

very odd!!!!!

"

 *Okay first there was a stick person*

Stick person: What should I do? Oh look, there's a rainbow!

  *The stick person runs to the rainbow*

Rainbow: What the f**k r u running to me for?!

  *The stick person takes a bite right out of the rainbow*

  * The stick person falls to his knees and says............

"You don't taste like f*****g skittles at all!!!!!!!!"

 

 

© 2009 Bre


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XD Where do u come up with this stuff????? We have 2 write some skits 2gether!

Posted 14 Years Ago


cleverness looks good on you..
very witty, a fun ride down the rainbow..
love how sticks & bows really do converse
Bravo
GBU

Posted 14 Years Ago


That was a funny little piece. May I make two suggestions? For starters, more people are likely to review your work if you write words out in full rather than abbreviating them. Secondly, you may limit the people who want to read your work by your use of swear words. There are plenty of words that can be used instead that get the same message across. If neither of these things bother you at all, then don't worry about it. Happy writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


that was so f*****g hilarious!!! two thumbs up! ;P

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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