amphetamines

amphetamines

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Loneliness across the seas
This was supposed to be our adventure free
Slender boys missing from garden grove
Your yellow smile taunting 
Convince him of love

Most beautiful girl that I know
No its not you haha
Hair black like the crows

Youre Tropical fruit 
Rusting on the vine
Your reasons lose meaning
Your reasons lose rhyme
Alienate me, trickery's drone
Best boy and girl missing
I feel so alone

Real eyes realize the right way from wrong 
Wake up and find vison,
Before she is gone.

© 2014 .


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CWP
I definitely appreciate the themes at work and frankly your take on free form works (for me at least haha). I will admit to some confusion, if you had considered making it longer I would have agreed. I would like very much to know who is at risk of losing said girl - or am I miss something?

Posted 10 Years Ago



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