To Sir

Late night thoughts.

I need to see you as you are,

 naked in your thoughts! 
To see your eyes, your soul, and mind,

 your body, and your haunts.

Beware I am a ‘Dragon’ 

a fearsome one, at that
I've tasted meat, but none so sweet,,

 as captured by my Sap

I’m blessed with noble magnetism

 of super power divine
I hold my golden sword aloft

 and on your shoulders shine.

Our paths will cross

 I’m sure of that, in private or in chat
I give my word with all I own,

 you never will look back

Beneath that skin and soul called man, 
I'll crawl inside your bones

 and drink your marrow sweetly

 as sure as newborn babes are born.

My fingertips trek lightly 

upon your fertile ground! 
Just beware I am the ‘Dragon’

 that echoes to your sound

My rapture is my Capture

 for nothing can surpass
the longing kiss

 of an invisible mist

 that shades beneath

 a Mask

I long for bed but you're not here! 
so storms give me no shelter
I bare the tempest-out-stretched arms
that throw me back ,in anger

What can I do to please you? 
To take you from the pain
all I have to offer
is the glory of my shame!

So take me as you want me…
this fire that burns within
has ignited all my fantasies
your loyalty within.

I am your muse, your hobby, your princess, and your Glove
I guarantee!

 with all my heart
It’s sent to Sir

With Love. 

Reviews

[Relic]

............................Geez!! This is quite a sizzling poem, isn't it? haha

Well done, my friend. :)

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you so much Relic

[shadrach hah]

Hi Rapture, this is outstanding, poetic grace, poetry to stir the loins. This is poetry at its sensual best, Deep emotion flows throughout. It stirs the heart to sing. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike.

[Franky]

This is delicious! I felt my pulse rising gradually throughout.

[Themistocles Parnassos]

Wonderful!
Well done!

[words preferred]

This was cool! Great descriptions of emotion and character and it flowed nicely. I love the mix of confidence and submission in the writer. Nicely done.

[Eve]

This is really beautiful in its own unique and honest way. I love how real it is, I can relate to it so well because of that. You aren't sugar-coating anything, you are what you are, this poem shows truth in how one really loves another. Through all the flaws and problems of the world, real love is accepting all of it. Amazing, well done.

[Rapturecapture]

Hi Eve, thank you so much for your wonderful review!!

[wredit.jordan]

I love the lines "I am the Dragon" very powerful!

[Onlyme]

Wow, incredible articulate demonstrative poem. About your muse that is picturesque and dramatic as well as dark and passionate. Rolled into one epic poem.

[Rapturecapture]

Hi Dawn, thank you for reading and your wonderful review
Rapture