Sensations

Bliss

Sparks gather neath a flame
golden textured tongue
melts all sources
hot cross rung

Ocean dreams
inking lap of solace
carefree waves
lawless
flawless. 

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Rapture, you sing a deeply sensual song, your words paint the strongest vision on the mind's canvas. You sing a song of joy that touches the heart with such deep emotions. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

The stanzas flow like waves against the reader's mind; to reach a state of perfect happiness, oblivious of everything else - excellent write! :-)

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you Phil your review is much appreciated!

[Onlyme]

Erotically provocative as well as magically enchanting. Words that truly shine.

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you Dee for your wonderful comment much appreciated!

[John the Baptist]

I like the spare presentation and the vivid imagery. Having trouble with "hot cross rung," however.

[Rapturecapture]

Hi John thank you for reading my thinking behind the line Hot cross rung is the ultimate divine orgasam
The little death so to speak, thank you for your wonderful review much appreciated

[Deuces]

You paint a serene picture with immense power.

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you very much for reading and your wonderful review much appreciated!!