Ice heart

A poem about me before and after meeting Sharaya

Ice heart, snakes tongue

Standing here when all is done

Is I alone a broken man

Having done all I can

 

Story written, book closed

The ink gone dry no longer flows

Broken hero I am who is dead inside

Falls down to his knees and waits to die

 

Scarred body, blank mind

For too long no love felt by thine

Ready for the end one who has no more fight

Slowly I’m engulfed by night

 

Bleeding heart, stitched soul

Seems unweaving, open holes

Running dry, rivers red

Am now I who’s left for dead

 

Brilliant beauty, blinding light

Descending angel clad in white

Are you my love, saving grace

To wipe the tears off of my face

Reviews

[Josh Alan]

great poem with good flow and the rhyming and vision is great
good poem keep it up

[Dark and Mysterious]

That is so amazing... Shelving it

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful (: Excellent work

[Felecia]

*whistles* This is amazing. Emotion is raw and fresh. Haunting and beautiful all at the same time. I can see EXACTLY what is was like before and after meeting your girl friend. This is brillant.