YOU SET ME FREE

YOU SET ME FREE

A Poem by FirstRain
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post breakup..? yes !

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Being a burden on you

a truth I never wished to see

exactly what you did

like your duty you set me free.



Whatever you ever got me 

 Were nothing more than  this worry

Falling in pieces on ground

Seems like you don't even feel sorry !..



I'm not a pity case that

you can show your mercy over

higher and  heavier..lower and deeper

the pain is sinking down somewhere.



I can't find you over land

or the tear-stained sea

How wrong you thought

That you set me free.





Desperate ..that's what you were

When your feelings became sure.

You  take it as a bliss
it's your selfishness that has no cure.



Set me free please..

Get out of my silly mind

Out of my heart ..out of my soul

Give me  peace I no longer can  find .



Go ahead and take a leave,

leave to somewhere else

as its seems my heart is 

no longer a happy place for you to be  !



That's when it make sense to me

It's  how you should SET ME FREE ! ! !

© 2016 FirstRain


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When love becomes a one way traffic, it hurts our ego and self esteem.
It is not easy to let go. The road to recovery may take years but we should know when is the right time to say good bye and move on.
This poem is very sad and sweet and is written from the heart.
I have written something similar. It's called "Drowning in your sea".
Do check it out sometime.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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FirstRain
FirstRain

Rajnandgaon, Chhattisgarh, India



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