With Love ........

You are the wooden rose that never dies

Your love keeps blooming endlessly

You’re the cool unseen breeze

Your presence gives comfort constantly

You’re the first rain droplet

Your stunning smile twinkles sensibly

You’re the trust I live with

Your strength of love lives eternally 

Author's Note

when somebody loves you more than you love yourself....this is how you feel :)
I'm back after a long time:) feeling good....

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful love poem. Nicely written.

[Droc]

Yes! But you have to learn to love yourself to obtain the full pleasure. From what I hear, and what I see in the pic, you could well fulfill the roll of that girl running around the Christmas tree, bubbling with laughter. There's enough nasty people on this site - including Droc - that you appear as a breath of spring air.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful poetry. Poetry about love and happiness. My favorite kind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Vani Jalagar]

My pleasure sir :)

[MomzillaNC]

Beautiful love poem.

NOTES: I like the color changes. But, I think it detracts from the stunning beauty of your words.

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you for for bringing it to my notice. I wil consider it from now onward....:)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. And, color can be used very effectively. I think color in this piece is the right way to go; but, maybe just one or two colors, or just strategically applied color (as with my poem "Autumn Sigh).

[Sami Khalil]

You are coming back with power and strength of love in this wonderful write. Bravo................

[Vani Jalagar]

Than you Sami ...its my pleasure to come back again to learn new words and writing tactics :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......