The Stain........

There’s a stain in her heart and soul,

Trust was kaput and emotions were hurt,

Nobody to listen and carve up her pain,

No heart to embrace, she went insane…..

She was battered in dark,

She was raped brutally,

Her innocence was killed,

Stain remained forever…….

NAKED TRUTH
if an acclaimed writer thinks that "to be born with a vagina is provocation enough", one can imagine where country stands ('vaginas for violating'). In most cases of assault people assume that the women might have invited problems through her dress or gestures. The average Indian man is yet to come to terms with the modern women. But what explains the rape of 3 or 4 year old child? What could they possibly have done to initiate the beast in man? It is a shame that such incidence happen commonly and that many people, including the politicians think death sentence for rapist is a harsh punishment. They don't deserve anything less.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"She was battered in dark,

She was raped brutally,

Her innocence was killed,

Stain remained forever……."

[zainul]

Time has come to put the stain on the bestial rapist
Take vow to capture and revenge the heinous culprit

[Prritiy]

i agree with you death and that too brutal with full humiliation... that should happen in public view and telecast should be done then only it will be detrimental for those who lack humanity.

a touching write Vani.

best wishes

[Anand Sehgal]

A serious problem of our society . Our mindset is the original demon

[Tom]

The men that commit these heinous violations are not men nor even animals, they are cowardly scumbags and deserve the severest punishment that a civilized nation can administer upon them !

A most honourable and brave poem Vani, you are indeed a valiant protector of the innocent !!

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you Tom for your honorable review :)

[lee von cleef]

Before Lawyers , there was a generation of Americans, rough ,wild, but ones willing to kill or be killed to protect a child. So sad the gene line that allows this to go on carries on.

[Vani Jalagar]

yea.....exploitation has increased beyond limits rather than declining gradually......Thank you for read :)

[Frieda P]

This resonates in my bones, and to my core...I've been on a survivor site many years now, and this happens much more frequently than people care to know....I don't think there is a harsh enough punishment for these lowly cowards...thank you for sharing this.

[Vani Jalagar]

You're welcome Frieda :) Thank you for kind review :)

[Frieda P]

Very affecting read, well deserved, my pleasure :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you for raising the awareness on this important issue. They should be punished severely to stop abusing those women or girls...It is life-scarring for the victims with nightmares and so forth...A great write...:)

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Pradeep]

Really , This thing is happening in each and every corner of our country and our laws are so bad that the offenders are protected by Politicians & the Police .

The Gals will be questioned so worst that no one can imagine . Our Law system is one of the worst in this whole world and case tooks place for more that 10 or 12 years to complete , By that time the accused will walk freely .

Only Two cases have been Fast track and verdicted.


Only thing i need is that , The Accused should be Hanged in the Public....

Then only our Mother , Sisters and all other Womens in this country will be safe.

Thank you for sharing social poetry
.

[Vani Jalagar]

Welcome and thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Last week a man killed himself after raping three girls in Cleveland, Ohio for 12 years. He needed a more painful death. I have sisters, daughters and a mother. We must teach our kids to respect each other. Your words are true. Some pain can't be forgotten. Thank you for sharing the powerful and needed poetry for today.
Coyote

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you so much for reading this......one of the news editor got sexually assaulted by her colleagues. That incident made me to write "The Stain".....But it is very sad to hear immature child getting sexually exploited...:(

[Droc]

Unfortunately man has a problem coming to terms with the fact that instinctively he is a repulsive beast, and that to embrace modern civilization with an eye to a future, he needs to recognize two things. 1. His mindset is still trapped in 'caveman' mode, and that in terms of human qualities conducive to a better society, he is somewhat barren. He needs to stop grunting and snorting, and learn to communicate. 2. He needs to understand that in this once lush garden 'she' is the 'rose' and he is the stinging nettle. Sometimes I am ashamed to be a male. Glad life has turned sweet for you Vani.