I _ _ _ _YOU

I _ _ _ _YOU

A Poem by Vani Jalagar

I esteem you....entirely
I Trust You...Everlastingly
I need you.....profoundly
I Love You....Unconditionally
I Feel You....Timelessly
I Miss You... Badly
I devote you...frantically
I crave you....Completely

© 2013 Vani Jalagar


Author's Note

Vani Jalagar
Any Grammatical errors, kindly let me now :)

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I loved this :)

best wishes


Posted 11 Years Ago


I read a poem of similar flavour on life. Where Life gets different perspective from the viewer's standpoint. Good write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vani Jalagar

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Crisp, Small very precise and indeed very powerful write Vani.. I loved this concept and that pic of smurfs is adding 5 Stars to this poetry. Well everyone here crave for love and even i do :)
Its the most important and very effective thing/sharing which every human being senses :)
I'm pleased that you shared it with me :)
- Singh :)
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vani Jalagar

11 Years Ago

Thank you Vikranth ...my pleasure that you loved it :)
Smurfs is my favorite cartoon series, .. read more
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

My pleasure :) thanks for sharing Vani :)
Small mistake my name is Vikrant... You added 1 extr.. read more
A perfect poem. Nice flow of thoughts in the hopeful and loving poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vani Jalagar

11 Years Ago

I feel so glad that you liked it.Thank you dear poet :)
Dumbstruck , no words to say what i felt after reading a lovely & truly emotional write, each & every words,lines has a strong expressions ,Thank You ...................

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vani Jalagar

11 Years Ago

My Pleasure :)
A sublime expression of deep love that would melt any heart!

A beautiful sonnet !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vani Jalagar

11 Years Ago

:) first trial...Thank you for appraisal Tom :)
Wow. Soooo good and powerful emotive...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vani Jalagar

11 Years Ago

To love and to be loved is a very pleasureful moment in life....I'm glad you felt this emotive...:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I did . I agree. You are welcome...:)
This is so sweet....overwhelmingly romantic and the way we all hope to be loved one day. Such an enjoyable read. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vani Jalagar

11 Years Ago

wow! now this indeed became more romantic...... Thank you Lydia :)

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