Resting in Peace.....

My heart sobs with melancholy, drifting alone at the creek

Possessing an abject stipulation engulfing the dead desires

You plunged me in the trail of murkiness to endure affliction

Destroyed “us” and created “me”, seizing my elation

A crimson rose, and immaculate nugget on a white satin stuff

The last souvenir is now sinking in the sea, very dreary and sober

Devastating the wiles and reasons u bestow to bring me back

Spirit is worsening eventually; breath is on the verge of cease

Soul is ahead to set off from corpse, gazing the azure sky

Angles sigh from above to heal my offended and broken heart

Here it goes parting the snuffle behind, burying the memoirs

Tendering en route of seraphs to rest in peace forever……..

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

pensive write put to perfection. but artists have a knack to regain strength fast. So wish to see a happy poem of hope from you soon :)

[Prritiy]

breaking of heart ahh how easy it is for some and how it destroys others.... you have penned your pain in nice touching manner, it does touch the core.

May the healing be full and remain intact ever.

best wishes

[Frieda P]

A sad read that I think is relatable to many, rest in peace, not sure if that ever really fully happens in matters of the heart anyway. Very nicely pen'd Vani, like the format too.

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was mine Vani :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Deeper and very sad poem Vani this really very touchy and I'm impressed :)
Well I hope you're in good shape now and this was not related to you :(
Please if this is related to you (if only) then do take care dearie :)
Stay blessed :)
- Singh :)

[Vani Jalagar]

once upon a time it was related to me..but not now. I'm blessed and happy with life :) Thank you for concern :)
I'm glad that you like my writings :)

[Vikrantsingh]

It sensed me very powerful agony. Thus, I'm glad your out of it :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad tone in the poem. I felt a sense of sadness and separation in the words. The strong description allowed the reader to feel the emotion in your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you Coyote.it's always a pleasure reading your review.....:)

[Tom]

The body may die but the soul lives on forever and so a broken heart will mend !

A beautiful, imaginative read, kudos to you once more great Poet !

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you for kudos dear friend :) feeling glad :)

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the poem and all the aspects of this poem are great...I even like the font...Bravo...:)

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you for reviewing Sami :) it encourages me........

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)