Keep Rising.......

Keep Rising, keep rising

Along the path of light.

Along the path of evolution,

Rejoice in sublimity and impeccability,

Walk on truthfulness

Walk on truthfulness.

 

Keep rising, keep rising,

Give our hours to enduring work

Dedicate our day to discipline,

We’ll find ourselves on the track of progress,

The pathway of peacefulness.

 

Keep rising, keep rising,

Walking on the path of glow,

Is a soaring order

The cool breeze may turn to headwind, but

Every dark cloud has silver lining.

 

Keep rising, keep rising,

Never lose thy hope,

In this journey we will reach,

Up to the sky and the gleaming stars,

A bliss which a hard hand can feel.

 

Keep rising, keep rising,

Get a panoramic and optimistic view

Prosperity and ecstasy comes to thy lives,

And still thou keep rising

Along the path of light.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A very positive and inspiring poem that lift us up from the mundane of daily agony...Splendid...:)

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Great work with imagination and I really agree with Cario's review you painted it with feeling and true emotions loved your narration :)
Cheers!
- Singh :)

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you so much Vikrant:)

[DJ]

what a beautiful way to inspire and give hope to those who have painful experiences or fall every time they try to strive for something greater. That is the sense that I get out of this write, please correct me if I'm wrong. A beautiful and optimistic write, something that I was in need of today. Thank you :)

[Vani Jalagar]

exactly correct Cairo..this poem is meant for healing the pain and motivation to move further in life. After all life has to go on........Thanks for reading :)

[DJ]

It certainly comes across that way my friend. My pleasure :)

[Broken Wings]

Beautiful message in this piece. I like the positivity and optimism shining through-out this. It is nice to read a positive piece every now and then. Thanks for sharing this up-lifting write with me.

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you :)

[Sharon Kim]

Lovely-filled with such hope and optimism!

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you Sharon for your kind review......:)

[Rahul]

Font's beautiful, word's nicely penned indeed, your thought, theme, pic. as well as your Imaginary seemed creative. Keep writing.

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you so much for appreciation....:-)

[Rahul]

My pleasure :) I can ssee by this write how much talent you got. You've a nice creativity. You;ve to keep writing some writes as well as even you;ve to write some books too "Vani" :)

[Pradeep]

Good one ..... Your are referring for the people who have been failing in the life or for giving hope to them , I am not an Expert in it judging , Its just my thought , Thanks

[Vani Jalagar]

most welcome........exactly right. But it is for every bud(child) that blossoms into a beautiful flower(citizen)