United

United

A Poem by Ranger Nadaly

My eyes won't close.
My mouth won't stop.

"We are the angry mob ..."

I can't stop.
My voice grows with the crowd.
I can feel the heat from the bodies closing in on me.
I feel the subconscious fear, 
And the thrill ..

Everyone's eyes are focused,
There's no lack of intensity.
I feed off my surroundings,
Their passion and excitement 
Warms my body.

My heels are throbbing
And the movement of the mob
Is like an ocean in a storm,
And I'm riding it.

Nothing else matters,
Everything else can go to hell.
I'm in the moment
And I feel everything surrounding me.

My heart is reaching its limit,
And I don't care.

The ability to speak has been taken away from me,
We shout, we sing.

It's us,
And the band.

"We are the angry mob,
We read the papers everyday,
We like who we like,
We hate who we hate,
But we're also easily swayed!"

© 2015 Ranger Nadaly


Author's Note

Ranger Nadaly
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fgoy8dM5dlc

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A very interesting & otherwise descriptive write, it felt like I was following you in a story. Cheers, N

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wowww a contemporary truth.
Real coolness in your piece,I se3
Keep writing .
-FC

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ranger Nadaly

9 Years Ago

Thank you, I just know for me entering a concert is like entering another world.
fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Wowwww..Sincere and hardworking attitude you have got there (respect).good luck:)

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