Sorry

Your orchestral fury is haunting my wake.
Rippled chords blooming on my sad mistake.

I am sorry

Reviews

[Aura]

Short but powerful! When we witness another persons anger for a wrong we've committed, we feel guilty, saddened by what we have done. Sorry may be one word... but it is an important one to fix hurt feelings and to keep a relationship going. Thanks for sharing!

[Ranger Kessel]

Thanks this one helped me get past some guilt

[Aura]

You are welcome, I am glad you got over it!

[W. Barrett Munn]

Interesting metaphors. “haunting my wake” implies death, not literal but guilt as deeply felt as death. The “blooming chords” tells me you are not yet forgiven for the anger still grows.

Interesting and good thought behind it.

[Ranger Kessel]

Thank you fir the review

[Robert Haigh]

I've seen that "orchestral fury" from my wife, when she perceives a wrong has been done to her! All part of life's (and love's) rich pageant! Yes, saying sorry can help! Nicely penned!

[Ranger Kessel]

Thank you for the review

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Not the "thundering velvet hand" sang of by Dan Fogelburg in "Leader of the Band". I think this one might be a bit more accusatory. We wonder what "sad mistake" brought about your demise. Good read. F.

[Ranger Kessel]

Thank you for the review

[lightsong]

And that's creativity, to turn something sad, painful with negativity, into something hauntingly beautiful, a touching song of forgiveness. Beautiful~

[Ranger Kessel]

Thanks for stopping by

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I agree with Chris this is such a creative piece of poetry. Excellent work RK.

[Ranger Kessel]

Thanks for your time

[Chris Shaw]

Brevity, but I like it. 'Your orchestral fury is so imaginative. Not only that, a sorry goes a long way. I hope whoever you have upset accepts it. Sometimes the briefest of writes can have most impact.

Chris

[Ranger Kessel]

Thanks you Chris