Morning
A Poem by
Ranger Kessel
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQRmCy6LfjI
When your eyes tear in the morning,
light runs from you.
twists around
changing hues
When you've had warning,
when your virtue
crumbles before you
When dawn fades away,
or when they hurt you...
Your flag flies
tattered and grey
When the hatred you've kept at bay
becomes longing,teardrops ensue,
Watery stains on
portraits you drew.
When the tide calls for you
spear pierces your side
it drains from you
there is nowhere to hide
I will run to you
I will save you
steer mercy to ground
You have rescued me
I will shine for you
Unleash the Heavens,
before we are drowned.
I will run to you
we will start anew
our own island,
alone in the sound
You have rescued me
in the morning
with the love
we have found.
© 2022 Ranger Kessel
Author's Note
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQRmCy6LfjI
Featured Review
Beautiful words, gently laid... such a sweet start, such a heart and mind journey throughout. And the finish just isn't one, tis infinite.
'I will run to you ~ we will start anew ~ our own island, ~ alone in the sound.. ' Maybe everyone should do that.. some time.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thank you you are very kind
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our own sound,sounds appealing
Posted 5 Years Ago
our own sound,sounds appealing
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Thanks it is in spirit
5 Years Ago
of course,but real in your mind
5 Years Ago
A place to go when I need it. Mind and spirit I think
Indeed, who could say no to "starting alone on our own island"? Beautifully written.....
Love can indeed rescue and gift lovers with new chances :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
Indeed, who could say no to "starting alone on our own island"? Beautifully written.....
Love can indeed rescue and gift lovers with new chances :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks so much the kind words and the review. I appreciate it very much
This went into my favorites right away. I LOVE this poem. It's so raw and the wording is perfect. This is probably one of my most favorite poems.
Posted 6 Years Ago
This went into my favorites right away. I LOVE this poem. It's so raw and the wording is perfect. This is probably one of my most favorite poems.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you such for the wonderful words. You are too kind. I appreciate it very much.
Wonderful and hopeful words shared my friend. Love is give and take. Thank you Ranger Kessel for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
Wonderful and hopeful words shared my friend. Love is give and take. Thank you Ranger Kessel for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
6 Years Ago
You are too kind my friend. I do appreciate the review. As well as the kind words. Thank you!
6 Years Ago
You are welcome Ranger Kessel.
Beautiful words, gently laid... such a sweet start, such a heart and mind journey throughout. And the finish just isn't one, tis infinite.
'I will run to you ~ we will start anew ~ our own island, ~ alone in the sound.. ' Maybe everyone should do that.. some time.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Beautiful words, gently laid... such a sweet start, such a heart and mind journey throughout. And the finish just isn't one, tis infinite.
'I will run to you ~ we will start anew ~ our own island, ~ alone in the sound.. ' Maybe everyone should do that.. some time.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thank you you are very kind
This reads nice along with a house beat. I like it. Made me smile.
Posted 6 Years Ago
This reads nice along with a house beat. I like it. Made me smile.
6 Years Ago
Thanks for the kind words. I am very thankful.
Work the romance, the passions, the skills, the seas or teeth inside of daffodils if you must ..just whatever it is that gets you to your page... Wake to that and when the time and voice arrives all of it will erupt and serve as it has here. Thanks~
Posted 6 Years Ago
Work the romance, the passions, the skills, the seas or teeth inside of daffodils if you must ..just whatever it is that gets you to your page... Wake to that and when the time and voice arrives all of it will erupt and serve as it has here. Thanks~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thanks man for the read and review it is appreciated!
Not really a story is it? Lovely poem tho, very heart felt...
Posted 6 Years Ago
Not really a story is it? Lovely poem tho, very heart felt...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Were you expecting a story? It is listed as a poem.
I appreciate the read and review... read more Were you expecting a story? It is listed as a poem.
I appreciate the read and review. Thank you
dear Ranger... there is beauty in being rescued... adopting a hurt person or pet...
to wipe away tears and fears... to bring trust and love once again. truly, Pat
Posted 6 Years Ago
dear Ranger... there is beauty in being rescued... adopting a hurt person or pet...
to wipe away tears and fears... to bring trust and love once again. truly, Pat
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you for the read and review. You are very kind
6 Years Ago
You are welcome...
Being there for someone, when they are going through times of trouble is an act of great kindness and generosity. That's what I picked up reading this lovely poem. Thank you.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
Being there for someone, when they are going through times of trouble is an act of great kindness and generosity. That's what I picked up reading this lovely poem. Thank you.
Chris
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thank you for the kind words. I appreciate the review as well
6 Years Ago
You are welcome
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