If you aren't killing, you will be killed.
if you aren't hunting, you will be hunted.
Devour to survive.
Unless you're like me...then accepting a helping hand will make you think yourself a weakling...that being said, fight hard, fight strong, and make sure you prevail...nice poem by the way
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the review. What you've said it what I'm trying to convey in a sense, that life is a figh.. read moreThanks for the review. What you've said it what I'm trying to convey in a sense, that life is a fight and choices mean survival.
Interesting poem! It reminds me of a quote from an author named Patrick Ness, "We are the choices we make." Whether you agree with this statement or not, it is an intriguing question. Thanks for the poem!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for reading my poem and commenting. Ooh, I like that quote, it does resonate with this poem!
Balance in all things ... too much of anything is bad.
Ignorance is bliss and power corrupts ... the easy way out is choosing sides, being neutral and balanced is the hardest endeavour but it brings peace and it's rewards are much greater.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing, I really like your outtake on this poem!
Between a rock and a hard place. The rock being the fundamental believe, the hard place being the compromise. What to chose ? I find that back in your poem. Well done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing, that's what I was going for so I'm happy you got that from my poem!
I love the two lines: "A lack of knowledge, or purposeful ignorance." Wonderful word choice for the entire poem! I interpreted the poem as a fight between right and wrong things to do. I really love this.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the review, I really love the different out takes people can glean from reading my poetry.. read moreThanks for the review, I really love the different out takes people can glean from reading my poetry!
If you aren't killing, you will be killed.
if you aren't hunting, you will be hunted.
Devour to survive.
Unless you're like me...then accepting a helping hand will make you think yourself a weakling...that being said, fight hard, fight strong, and make sure you prevail...nice poem by the way
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the review. What you've said it what I'm trying to convey in a sense, that life is a figh.. read moreThanks for the review. What you've said it what I'm trying to convey in a sense, that life is a fight and choices mean survival.
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