Alone

Alone

A Poem by Alexanda Corrin
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She has lived to long to even care...

"
Through the ages she can do nothing but - 
watch as - 
everybody she ever spoke to, saw, loved -
as everybody she ever knew fell away.

They called it a miracle - 
she a curse.

But in the end - 
they disappear to.

She lives - 
compassion turning into - 
apathy, 
discord,
hate.

All alone now,
nobody knows,
even then...
nobody cares.

It is a mercy she could never comprehend,
alone,
forever, 
forgotten.

She can't even bring herself to care,
the passage of another -
day, year, century, millennia.

Time is no longer an obstacle,
it is a curse. 

© 2015 Alexanda Corrin


Author's Note

Alexanda Corrin
I don't even know what that was... As always feedback is welcomed.

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It was immortality from the other side.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this reminds me of immortality so much. I love this, keep up the amazing work!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alexanda Corrin

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! Immortality was my prompt :)
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

9 Years Ago

your welcome!!!! :)
You capture well the curse of immortality. Reminds me of the movie The Age of Adeline. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alexanda Corrin

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, I really don't like the idea of immortality and have had a debate over it wit.. read more

"All alone now,
nobody knows,
even then...
nobody cares."
I like the fact that it really happens in real life. I feel the hurt, I feel myself. Cheers to the author!


Posted 9 Years Ago


Alexanda Corrin

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, I find it a bit funny that what started as a poem on my dislike for immor.. read more
Anna James

9 Years Ago

Any of the introverts would love to see and relate to this. By the way, you are welcome!
Yes, the idea of immortality and the pain that it can bring is a very interesting idea to think about, isn't it? It's discussed in an interesting way in The Vampire Lestat series, as well as Doctor Who!
Loved the poem, it was very thought provoking.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alexanda Corrin

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! I'm glad I'm conveying what it want, and find it very interesting the possibl.. read more
A different perspective on living to a ripe old age, that I am sure some who do would be in complete agreement with. To watch everyone you know pass on and the circle of friends diminish to nought, is a harsh end to a life. Wonderfully captured.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexanda Corrin

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing, I was watching the new Doctor Who episodes and thinking about immortality and .. read more

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Added on October 31, 2015
Last Updated on October 31, 2015
Tags: um, no idea what happened there, death, loss, mortality

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Alexanda Corrin
Alexanda Corrin

Sydney, NSW, Australia



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Hallo all, I'm an Australian woman who has a lot of hobbies and is obsessed with reading, particularly Fanfiction. Random stuff about me: I love books, anime/manga and marvel's movies! The movie.. more..

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