Conceal My darkness

My whole life was all about darkness and power,

when are relationship started just by this flower,

I wonder what you thought of me before you knew me,

love is hurtful and blind but not always you see?

Love your experiences because the better you'll be.

 

my heart was given to you cause you lit up my life,

I was really happy I didnt have to use that knife,

heart broken and hurt for the rest,

saying love is for only the people who are the best,

you'll be here for me to put me up to the test.

 

Darkness is the only thing I feel,

going to church even after a kneel,

commin closer and you find my appeal,

all I want is my darkness Concealed.

 

Author's Note

Don't comment on grammar just on the poem its self ^^

Reviews

[Amelia Falcone]

wow this was amazing, you are such a good poet [:

[J.Black]

Thought it had a nice touch,

"Darkness is the only thing I feel,

going to church even after a kneel,

commin closer and you find my appeal,

all I want is mt darkness Concealed." -- fix MT is should be my. Lol! Sorry, had to comment on grammar. I'm a grammar freak.