Forever heartbroken

poem straight from the heart

growing up is something in the makin,

being lost and hurt or generally forsaken,

sayin your not hurt when your really mistaken.

 

all our love is drifting away...far far away,

the loss of words making you lose what you want to say,

being in the most agonizing pain everyday.

 

being forced to love is not the way to be,

being lost in our thoughts so we dont agree,

as blind as we are its not easy to see.

 

Running through the dark down with the pain slope'n,

having our heart left in blood soakin,

forever being hurt and forever heart broken.

Author's Note

I didnt make mistakes just had to make it rhyme pls review

Reviews

[Amelia Falcone]

this is really good. i can totally relate. nice job

[Onyx Sky]

I like it, it really tells of how deep some1 can fall in love, and how that love can be shattered.

[Kaotic Barbie]

pretty goood!