Jealousy

Jealousy

A Poem by Kaytlyn
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No matter what you do, I shall never compare.

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You have always been better
at everything you do I do not compare.
Your skill is greatly noticed while I'm lacking greatly.
We both have overcome hardships
yet you have overcome them with such grace, as I hold onto the pain with pleasure.
Is it wrong to say I hate you with a passion? No? Yes?
You're my greatest nightmare.
You prance around and everyone loves you
capturing them with such a sweet smile
Sickening.
I detest your every whim.
What is so special about you? What makes you so great?
With a tender voice, that soft laugh, those tormenting green eyes
yet they say you're personality is what makes you beautiful.
Ha, is it wrong to say I hate you with a passion?
A passion so deep it courses through my veins.
Why am I nice to you? What is keeping me from smacking you down in front of your fans?
Fear.
Fear of people shamming me for more than what I already am
A nuisance, an annoyance, a ignorant fool is who happily hates you.
I have never gotten a second glance, you have always stood in my wake
I will never be free of you and that adds on to why I hate you.
Should I stay or should I go?
I will never be able to live my life to the fullest when you, yes you prevent my skill from surfacing.
Is it wrong to say I hate you with a passion?
Is it wrong to say that you're my enemy?
Sickening fear, sickening heart, sickening fate, my life is sick.
I love it.

© 2017 Kaytlyn


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Amazingly beautiful. Very honest. Everyone feels jealous of someone at some point in their life. Of course, it is bad. Here the jealous person is expressing himself and that too directly to the person he is jealous of. Really amazing.
Though I am not talented enough for reviewing but Lines which I like the most were-
I will never be free of you and that adds on to why I hate you

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kaytlyn

8 Years Ago

AWWWWWWW thank you! This is my most favorite that i've ever written. thank you for taking the time t.. read more



Reviews

Amazingly beautiful. Very honest. Everyone feels jealous of someone at some point in their life. Of course, it is bad. Here the jealous person is expressing himself and that too directly to the person he is jealous of. Really amazing.
Though I am not talented enough for reviewing but Lines which I like the most were-
I will never be free of you and that adds on to why I hate you

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kaytlyn

8 Years Ago

AWWWWWWW thank you! This is my most favorite that i've ever written. thank you for taking the time t.. read more
This was a little, thrilling and I have to say if this is based on true feelings no one is inferior to you. You do have a gift, you have an amazing way of capturing feelings in your writing. Don't ever let some one stand in your way ever.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 9, 2015
Last Updated on August 1, 2017
Tags: Jealousy, Hate, Love, Fear, Desperation, Depression, Loneliness, Passion

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Kaytlyn
Kaytlyn

Orlando, FL



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Hey I'm Kaytlyn. i'm 25, I live in that annoying of a state called Florida. I do enjoy writing and reading. So send me requests anytime. I love to write my "heart" out. I feel its best to express all .. more..

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