It was you or...

It was you or...

A Poem by Ramit Taneja
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This poem is about a lover who describing his beloved

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It was you or the essence of your presence 
It was you or the wind blowing your name 
It was you or my breathe including your breathe 
It was you or the fragrance of you in my mind 
It was you or the felling of love for you residing in my heart 
It was you or the movement of your anklets which sounds
It was you or hotness of sun warming my life
It was you or brightness of moon that shines 
It was you or the air which I can't hold in my hand 
It was you or my own shadow which never leave me 
It was you or happiness that give a smile on my face 
It was you or a magic which fill all my wounds with a touch and care 
It was you or the beauty of nature that I always admire 
It was you or its my soul in my body  
It was you or the  heart that give me beats to live 
It was you or the time who is changing
It was you or my life which I fear I loose

© 2015 Ramit Taneja


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Ramit Taneja
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Beautiful imagery Ramit, this is a great poem! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ramit Taneja

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear :D

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Ramit Taneja
Ramit Taneja

karnal, haryana, India



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