I like this short poem, especially the last last line "but now I can only feel your impression". This is a very interesting idea, and so true, because when people are not in our presence, we only feel an impression. This is a well written poem, great job :) I would love to read a second poem about your impression of her.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks a lot , I appreciate you review my poem and gave this wonderful feedback , you encouraged me .. read moreThanks a lot , I appreciate you review my poem and gave this wonderful feedback , you encouraged me to write more. Thanks a lot now surely i will write more asap :)
I had written many before but in Hindi language in english this is my 4th one and 1st which i let other read :) thanks again
I like this short poem, especially the last last line "but now I can only feel your impression". This is a very interesting idea, and so true, because when people are not in our presence, we only feel an impression. This is a well written poem, great job :) I would love to read a second poem about your impression of her.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks a lot , I appreciate you review my poem and gave this wonderful feedback , you encouraged me .. read moreThanks a lot , I appreciate you review my poem and gave this wonderful feedback , you encouraged me to write more. Thanks a lot now surely i will write more asap :)
I had written many before but in Hindi language in english this is my 4th one and 1st which i let other read :) thanks again