The time

The time

A Poem by Ramit Taneja
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short poem

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The time we talked was time of heaven
last we talked was on February seven
My heart get flattered with all your expression
but now I can only feel your impression

 
 

© 2015 Ramit Taneja


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Ramit Taneja
short first poem here please give feedback

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I like this short poem, especially the last last line "but now I can only feel your impression". This is a very interesting idea, and so true, because when people are not in our presence, we only feel an impression. This is a well written poem, great job :) I would love to read a second poem about your impression of her.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ramit Taneja

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot , I appreciate you review my poem and gave this wonderful feedback , you encouraged me .. read more
Ramit Taneja

9 Years Ago

@Madison Rose i have written second too.



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I like this short poem, especially the last last line "but now I can only feel your impression". This is a very interesting idea, and so true, because when people are not in our presence, we only feel an impression. This is a well written poem, great job :) I would love to read a second poem about your impression of her.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ramit Taneja

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot , I appreciate you review my poem and gave this wonderful feedback , you encouraged me .. read more
Ramit Taneja

9 Years Ago

@Madison Rose i have written second too.

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Ramit Taneja
Ramit Taneja

karnal, haryana, India



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