I truly love you

My hearts about to burst, i never want it to end <3

My arms feel empty

Yearning so greatly

For your warm, caring

Touch. I care for you

My darling sweet love.

Nothing is bright now

You are not with me.

My body feels cold

Even though you’re close

It can’t be enough

Without you beside.

Each thing that I do

Makes me wish

I was with you now.

You make my heart race.

You make my head soar.

Everything is so

Simple, when we love.

I have never felt

This before now

I pray it won’t end.

You are like nothing

Before. You are mine.

I truly love you.

My bright glowing star.

Author's Note

Every line have 5 syllables.....I hope

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

"Everything is so simple, when we love" pretty much says it all regarding how love is supposed to be when things are right.
An accurate expression of the feeling and longing most lose as the years go by. A nice reminder.
I enjoyed this,
thanks for sharing

[PossiblyAlice]

Thanks for reading :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hmmm honest and captivating love it!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Poetry is writing without the need
for punctuation or other rules.
Poetry spells out your intentions in
words that only the heart can understand.
Sorry for the philosophizing--- just trying to
be helpful.
Your poem is a true work of art. I am honored
to have read you.
Thank You,
----- Eagle Cruagh

[PossiblyAlice]

Any review is a honor for me, thank you :)

[Abdul Aziz]

I would prefer to gloss over the syllabification and emphasize the simplicity of your write. It is pleasant to read, and somehow not corny as writes of this kind tend to be. Kudos for that!

[PossiblyAlice]

Thank you, I wasn't very confident in this piece but that was what I tried to do :)

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

This is so pleasant and heartfelt, love it!

This write is nice, to read, with all the syllables, and heartfelt emotions,
Thank you for sharing.

E.L.

[PossiblyAlice]

every line has* damn....you'd think I would atleast have good grammer on a writing site....alas....no .-.

[Tasha]

I see the five syllables. I thought this was truly lovely, and it came straight from the heart. Wonderful write.