"Stop that now!"

"Stop that now!"

A Poem by BLR

I fondle with the idea
that life has true meaning

I get burned and scorned by my elders:
"Stop that now! Just sit, and breathe"

© 2011 BLR


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I thought you were going to say:

"stop that! you'll go blind"

...and it would've worked too!


Posted 11 Years Ago


It reminded me of innoceince.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is a very mystifying question, whether there is a point to life...and one that some people don't want to ask. You capture the idea well--is it better to search for meaning or simply exist and enjoy your time while it lasts?

Posted 13 Years Ago


It makes me smile at the end, thinking of what life means can be painful and its kinda make your brain work in a high speed, cause we never really sure what are we after. "Stop that now! Just sit, and breathe" , i like the ending, relax ourselves is important as well, and I love this short, simple but clear poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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