HELMI

My blue, blue wind,

Your eyes,

My virtue

Bows at your sight,

My helmi,

Your sweet smile

Never fails

The only one that shares

The only one that bares

The heaviest of my sorrows.

My helmi,

My virtue,

My hyacinth,

Where ever you are

I hope you can hear,

Breath me in and out.

My helmi

Never lose me,

Never let me go

For you are my love,

For you are my crow

That carries me through

This world.

My helmi,

White as the snow,

Caress my cold heart.

My virtue,

True as the stars glow,

Never lose me,

Never let me go.

My hyacinth,

My beautiful blue wind,

Breath me in and out,

Don't leave me,

Don't leave me without.

Author's Note

When the presence of someone dear still lingers on.

Reviews

[rose with love]

helmi is the finnish word for pearl. that;s how i use to call my dear person. i like very much how finnish language sounds. and hyacinth is a genus of plant like water hyacinth or garden hyacinth. they are her favorite flowers.

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I tried Latin, Spanish and Romanian translations for 'helmi' and 'hyacinth', but I didn't come up with anything non-obvious. I dislike it when I cannot make sense of then words, but I love the way they sound. Your author's note is the same as my review and perception- the beautiful presence of someone dear.

[Jeremy Baker]

Absolutely bueatiful in so many ways. This is a great poem.