Sinful

"the bright day is done and we are for the dark"

Dead leaves come back to the old tree of hearts
Singing along with the voice of death
Marching straight, ace of spades,
Tearing apart whatever remained-from me and you, old souls no longer safe.

She give a glance of tears filled with hate and dispair.
No hope can save her from the scarlet chains he creates,
No longer her smile will save the flower from the everlasting cruel queen,
Only her pain they will hear created by the most deadliest sin.

He stares into the darkness, filled with regrets and old lost memories.
No longer he will catch the brightest light on earth,
No longer he will laugh... the moment is ceasing.

Dark leaves surround the hearts with flames.
Nine circles they create-shades
With evil faces gazing at the prettiest flower on earth
While her soul's crumbling
And lights with faces of angels cry on earth
While she is stumbling.

His soul remained untouched by Gods,
His soul began to shout,
His heart turned dark
While the light was slowly fading into Hades mouth.
His body began to crawl,
His mind began to see what she saw-his heart
Of lust darkened by the faces of gods
Who took him, his flower and  his heart...

Reviews

[SinnerInspired]

This is f*****g awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! It has amazing detail& great vocabulary Keep the poems coming please!!
-SinnerInspired

[Raven Starhawk]

I have to say as I read this I was blown away. Your concept of poetry is brilliance and expresses a sort of darkness I reside in when reality gets to be too much.

[w2de35657u687y4324rf]

"Singing along with the voice of death" That piece of imagery is genius... the voice of death-- how beautifully sinister.
"No longer he will laugh... the moment is ceasing." The seriousness of this line caught my eye. It was like a death threat. Wonderful.
I've done a lot of reviewing recently and this is the first piece I have enjoyed! Thank you so very much for your literary prowess. I didn't even have to dissect your grammar. Brilliant piece. The inception was a fantastically dark doorway. Also, the concluding stanza was amazing. I apologize for the lack of organization in this review. I'm just slopping my thoughts together here and there. At least its honest. I love it.

[Dream Weaver]

Dark emotive and brilliant...