The moon

The moon is my latest poem

At night I face the moon.
The moon does not face me.
The moon sees my every negativity,
But does not see its own stain.
The moon shines with great pride,
But does not see my sadness.
Living with thousand stars .
The moon delights at my loneliness.
Wow moon,
Wow.

Raj Swami

Reviews

[Quill]

i do believe the moon gives you light in the darkness, doesn't that make it a friend

[Raj Swami]

Thank you so much for review
Beautiful review

[Quill]

you are welcome