Wet remains...

For a contest using the 10 words which revived my muse...

She treads lightly

Fathoming the layered darkness

Streaked by flashes of lightening

Crackling mangled branches

Wet surroundings

No stirring of life

To dispel deathly stillness

No cloak to shield the shiver

As she drags the remains

Of the woman within

 

Reviews

[None]

This is absolutely beautiful...the way you enveloped the words to form such a profound and meaningful poem! You have such a splendid gift (I always have known that.) Most poems using 10 words for a contest come out forced or out of sorts but this is not the case at all here! I wish you the very best in the contest with your expressive poem. I'm saving this to favorites as I can relate to the deeper meaning here regarding the revival of a muse!

[Sushma Chaudhary]

Indeed a beautiful one! Loved your content.

[Michael X]

The sense of depression blended with a creative emotional outpouring, good job!

[zainul]

Awesome work.
The dynamic image is unforgettable.

[A. Amos]

This is deep yet beautiful written, you have done nice job my friend!

[SAYED THANGAL]

I like the rhythm and imagery of the poem as the most,
sayed thangal, kerala

[Rahul]

Very nice, deep, powerful and a realistic write. your words're damn strong here in this piece. Now you writings're forcing me to read your more stuffs. You've a great talent "wind". why don't you try to publish your writes in market too.... !! it'd gonna be great. you've a great talent.100/100.
keep writing :)

[KeeD]

wow you've painted such a captivating picture .. of such broken beauty.. amazing writing

[JC]

dark agony that has an immense beauty in it.

[Pradeep Nair]

I don't see anything recent from you..?
But why?
there is a rhythm in your language..
please keep writing....

[Suditi]

WOW.
This was something!
A profound write.
I love the choice of words.