Written for a contest-Advanced 10/40
Using all ten words,(Dust, only, paint, alibi, through, pencil, property, sprayed, organize, borrow )
in order, had to write a poem using
exactly forty words.
Drizzling dust on my windowOnly paints an alibi for my absent spiritSome peer through At a hazy pencil sketch of meListless property strewn Sprayed with neglectI have to shake off the gloomBorrow zest organise life
This is what true talent is all about and that is why I'm again writing here that you are one of the most talented writers present here at Cafe!
This is exceptionally well, and conveying such a thoughtful message...Poems like this are always in my goodbooks :)
(In between, you forgot to highlight the word "alibi" I guess)
Brilliant piece of writing, Like always...!
This is what true talent is all about and that is why I'm again writing here that you are one of the most talented writers present here at Cafe!
This is exceptionally well, and conveying such a thoughtful message...Poems like this are always in my goodbooks :)
(In between, you forgot to highlight the word "alibi" I guess)
Brilliant piece of writing, Like always...!
Flickering and blazing,not yet blown out in the wind...
the flame has to sustain itself when the rains set in...
Beyond norms and overrated sanity
" We look before and after
And pine for what i.. more..