Shadows on the wall

Shadows on the wall

A Poem by Candle in the wind

Shadows on the wall

Sway with the whims of light

Then I realise it is the breeze

The makes the lamp swing

Shadows elongate and spread out

They crouch and even disappear at times

They flicker and darken

They ripple and create intricate patterns

Like a filigree or a  kaleidoscope

I sit and stare at them

Are they the shadows of my mind ?

© 2008 Candle in the wind


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"Shadows of mind"
Our minds make myriad pictures. Some pleasant some not, some evil and some rot.

The dark shadows are nothing but the stronger and dominant emotions that take over the hallow ones. The day one will able to shed all these opaque shadows and let the rays of lights follow, we would all be saints.

But we are not saints...right??

Lets live for the moment. And saint we might become one day...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I read it about 4-5 times and then I realized that how thoughtful this poem is!
Our mind often hallucinates us and forces us to believe on something unreal...something whose identity lies only on our mind.
I also loved the imagery in it and how beautifully you have painted a picture on reader's mind through this poem!
Both the pics are going very well with it! Specially the second pic...
Great work as always! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love the picture you paint as well as the words you weave through the questions we must all ask of ourselves.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"Shadows of mind"
Our minds make myriad pictures. Some pleasant some not, some evil and some rot.

The dark shadows are nothing but the stronger and dominant emotions that take over the hallow ones. The day one will able to shed all these opaque shadows and let the rays of lights follow, we would all be saints.

But we are not saints...right??

Lets live for the moment. And saint we might become one day...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Candle in the wind
Candle in the wind

Calcutta, India



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