Alone in the rain...

"how it feels alone in the rain" .....Came across this line in Rain's poem and it sparked of myriad emotions.

If I am out on the terrace

Or prancing about in the lush green grass

Or just walking along a moutain path

Or strolling along the river bank

Alone in the rain

Getting drenched to the core

The shower on my face

The droplets glistening in my hair

I could be so happy

Humming a tune

Stretching out my palm to feel the pitter patter

Or I could be crying

The rain veiling my tears

Letting my pain flow out

Not caring about the shiver

Running along my spine

Or  I could be longing for someone

The rain inducing romantic delight

A wisp of my imagination

Or simply I would find a little poem

Budding in my mind

Writhing to be set free

 

Reviews

[Pradeep Nair]

Brings out the nostalgia through the beautifully crafted language.

"Alone in the rain
Getting drenched to the core
The shower on my face
The droplets glistening in my hair"---

the lines make me the feel of being in the rain... great..

After Elton John and Bernie Taupin, its you....... the candle in the wind..

[zainul]

Great write on many dimensions on rain.

[sAM]

awesome ...
Or simply I would find a little poem
Budding in my mind
Writhing to be set free .... loved these lines ..... a lot goes unsaid .....
keep up the great work ...

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful. Each line adding to a outstanding ending to your poem. I like the flow and the story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

I too love walking in the rain...A very lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[None]

Your poem was written by you with such care and the emotions are right there and can be felt. I love the rain at times and who isn't tempted to splash in the puddles? I am always your friend--through the rain so you don't have to be alone. You bring such beauty--it's tangible and lovely. Wonderful!!

[Brenda Sue]

I love the imagery in this piece. I too love being in the rain and have when happy, crying, playing, etc etc etc.
Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[wizthom]

now this is a perfect write ,u did with the raindrop what u failed to do with candle in the wind .made it about emotion thus bringing the write to life.peace wizthom

[Natalie C]

There is nothing more inspiring than the rain. It truly is something that can induce so many different feelings within us. You did a brilliant job at describing all the possibilities of what rain could mean to each one of us. For me rain is a driving force, screaming for a poem to be written
Loved this!

[Floating on the feather..]

Rain...I have always loved it. Infact it does let out different emotions captured within us. It brings about someone else altogether in me....who loves to be set free, weave imaginations at a length and makes me want to live them....and may be for a moment i do live in that moment considering myself not a part of this world anymore.

This is lovely. The shades that you have added makes it perfect.