I really like the concept of the "mirage" and how you used it here. Your poem says so much in few precious words. The photos enhance your words and leave one wondering the answer to your questions. Your poem is beautifully written.
I'm listing the words of yours that stand out and go so well together here: "mirage, distant star, light years away, illusion, exist, figment of my imagination." Your writing is simply brilliant!
I really like the concept of the "mirage" and how you used it here. Your poem says so much in few precious words. The photos enhance your words and leave one wondering the answer to your questions. Your poem is beautifully written.
I'm listing the words of yours that stand out and go so well together here: "mirage, distant star, light years away, illusion, exist, figment of my imagination." Your writing is simply brilliant!
Hey this was amazing! Short but sure does pack a punch.
My friend you have done it once again, staying true to yourself - you have graced us with yet another thought provoking piece just the way you would know how.
Beautiful and the pics were great too
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Like in all your poems, the words, form, and visualization are very well done.
The poem was well lit by the two pictures put together. It emphasized the message. Consequently, they give more meanings to the two pictures.
Flickering and blazing,not yet blown out in the wind...
the flame has to sustain itself when the rains set in...
Beyond norms and overrated sanity
" We look before and after
And pine for what i.. more..