Went for a music recital last evening, wrapped around the melody and felt so serene, the music seeped in.....
Music is a crystal stream with tinkling ripplesThe sound of water lapping against the shoresSometimes it reverberates and resonatesStrums the very chords of your being Is like a turbulent seaIt is gentle breeze wafting melodiesOr a raging storm with flashes of lighteningRumbling thunder or gentle rhythmIt can be a soothing caress, a healing touchAn embodiment of serenityA placid blue skyThen again a singing birdOr a wandering minstrel Enchanting your thoughts and dreamsIt seeps within and plays insideThe lilting tunes sooth your soulThe lyrics invoke myriad moods Echo your emotions or memoriesMusic submerges your beingIt has cosmic grandeur Or a quiet solitude Simple notes or a magnificent symphonySwaying masses or cocooning privacyCreates tranquil delight or crazy fervorEvokes nostalgia, unleashes tearsMakes your spirit dance Awakens your soul or induces slumberMakes or breaks silenceIt is for serenading, celebrating, dedicating,meditatingConnecting surpassing boundaries Transcending language and cultureMusic is solace
Music has a way of doing thing to the heart and soul that nothing else is capable of. Feeling the power of the melody is such a wonderful experience to partake of. Allowing the music itself guide and lead you to the place within yourself that is both needed and desired so completely. I really enjoyed your words as they gave me such wonderful thoughts and feelings.
lovingly capturing the definition, describing with vivid, subtly embracing context,
such words are gentle on the reader's mind, your poem is beautifully rendered,
knowledgable in its timeless message showing the magical, the endearing
quality musical harmony has on heart and soul, as well as being a fitting ode
to tribute something most people can relate to, I loved the sparkling images
you gracefully painted with enlightening perspective, the touching ending is perfect.
i really like this peace this is perfecetly penned, music is with in the soul of all of us and can suth us with in.reading this peace made me accually see the mental picture of the poem, very soothing and it was deliteful....ty for sharing this with me i hope to see more.
This is a very good piece. Music is truly universal, and I believe healing. But also, as your words say, it can carry you to a fever pitch. It has the ability to speak what our souls are feeling. Rain..
A great tribute to music, I believe that music is the carrier of culture and therfore the language of our souls, it can take you up and down and through every emotion our hearts and souls have to offer, becuase that is what our feelings have evolved with.
Beautiful write with such an amazing flow..
And music for me is the second name for LIFE...And yeah I agree with the power of music and also its necessity in our lives!
Brilliant work :)
Music has a way of doing thing to the heart and soul that nothing else is capable of. Feeling the power of the melody is such a wonderful experience to partake of. Allowing the music itself guide and lead you to the place within yourself that is both needed and desired so completely. I really enjoyed your words as they gave me such wonderful thoughts and feelings.
Great Job!!!!!!
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Great form and use of words.
There is good rhythm and the ambient depiction to set the message has been imparted well, the pictures did help too (like in all the other poems).
You have just described music to be as intoxicating as poetry, it can spiritually uplift.
Flickering and blazing,not yet blown out in the wind...
the flame has to sustain itself when the rains set in...
Beyond norms and overrated sanity
" We look before and after
And pine for what i.. more..