WHY

WHY

A Poem by Candle in the wind

 

"Why" is a potent word

Just leave it suspended

It can evoke varied responses

anxiety

indignation

exasperation

understanding

answers

explanation

justification

further queries

discomfort

trigger a  spirit of inquiry

or protest

voice moods and concerns

Whether "Why"commences a question

or just an exclamation

or just stands alone

As a single word

Or is repeated

"Why Why why"

The best thing is

When someone knows its flavour

And can satiate that "why"

or atleast understand

Why

Why cant it be so always!

© 2008 Candle in the wind


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I really liked this and thought it was very creative. You have pushed the lines of normality and knocked the dust off the formal style with this. I love to see a writer work within their own ideas of what is abd should be and not fall victim to trying to force the flow of thoughts into something that has no life of its own. You have written something different and wonderful here.

Great Job!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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In many ways this is what ole Tim Leary would consider the generation gap, and you managed the root in a few strokes. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

passionately ponder the dynamics of "why
as to know why reasoning is fundement
to perception,
An homage to aswareness
this is beautiful


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Why is one of the most important words! This is a great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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A nice way expression.. about why.. different n unique
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Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Why" is a potent word
Just leave it suspended
It can evoke varied responses"

It's almost as if the question mark was designed for just that...to leave "why" suspended. ?
It's like a little hook that allows the single-word question "why" to dangle from the subject.

I adore the way you view things, and your writes always inspire much thought.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WHY? -- A question that haunts us all....we are always looking for answers to these queries....but do you know why??
There....back to square one :: WHY ::

Well written and brilliantly expounded....Fantastic! Thanks for sharing!

God Bless You!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with my friend, Robert. This is very creative..very unique. How much better our life would be with the why...or would it ? Why helped the US cross the unknown west and start new cities. But, mostly "Why " causes frustration and doubt. Great piece, Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is definately food for thought. It is a powerful write. The structure adds to the work. You take us beyond the norm with this in many ways. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Good flow and a question i ask, we all ask, why.. this is really written well and the pictures go nicely.. good writing ..
Chloe
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A very creative and enjoyable write, I enjoyed it.

As a mother, I hear that three letter word quite often. "Why is the sky blue?" and "Why does butterflies flutter?" and then there is my Sam, "How many tons of CO2 gas is discharged into the atmosphere every year in addition to pollutants such as CO, NOx, H2 S, hydrocarbons, ash and other residues?" LOL

Fascinating and thought provoking, excellent writing!




Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Candle in the wind

Calcutta, India



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