Faded dream
A Poem by
Candle in the wind
The picture inspired this...
It was a gentle grasp
A firm clasp
A warm holding
Faith unfolding
Made her feel steady
And yet so heady
Was another world
Her spirit unfurled
Was like an embrace
With divine grace
The vision faded
Reality invaded
© 2008 Candle in the wind
Reviews
Very beautifully put together.... words of feelings so gentle
Posted 16 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
A lovely gentle write with a calming feel
Posted 16 Years Ago
A lovely gentle write with a calming feel
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
The rhythm in this is fantastic. I read it a second time faster and it was like a song! What beautiful imagery and your words float here and invite new beginnings. Very lovely and well written!!
Posted 16 Years Ago
The rhythm in this is fantastic. I read it a second time faster and it was like a song! What beautiful imagery and your words float here and invite new beginnings. Very lovely and well written!!
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
Simple and beautifully written .,.. tender ...
Posted 16 Years Ago
Simple and beautifully written .,.. tender ...
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 28, 2008
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Candle in the wind Calcutta, India
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